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[BooBoo*TheKiddo*]

I'm about to start writing a paper for one of my classes that is due tomorrow night at 6:30. I should have done this sooner but to tell the truth, I've wrote 3 of these papers already and deleted them all because I didn't like them.

Anyways, I was wndering if anyone would like to volunteer their time to read over my paper after I'm done with it. Just read over it for grammatic errors and such. If you want to do it, I'll pm the paper to you as soon as I'm done with it or I can email it to you, whichever is easier for you.
I just need you correction back by like 4 or 4:30pm tomorrow so I will have time to edit my paper before I print it and take it to class with me.



I'm going to try and not make it to long.

 

[3CsMommy]

Hit me with it if you like. I was a writing tutor in college and do beta now for fan fiction writers. I'm sure I can handle a research paper.

 

[BooBoo*TheKiddo*]

I will do.

It more of a personal narrative in thesis form or something like that

 

[BooBoo*TheKiddo*]

3CsMommy, I am pming it to you now. Thank you so much.

If anyone else is good at grammer and doesn't mind helped either pm me or post here. Thanks!

I greatly appreciate your all's help.

 

[BooBoo*TheKiddo*]

Sorry to post again but I got to leave for class in about 2 hours and the first 2 people haven't gotten back with me yet so I was wondering if anyone else would help me out.

Please and Thank you!

 

[3CsMommy]

Sent.

 

[addictedtochins]

Ok, I guess you are running out of time. Here are some suggestions from me, I hope you can understand what I'm saying. I didn't want to post the whole paper

information delete "that" we needed wasn’t an easy task
and it was extremely stressful add "and time consuming" since the insurance company wasn’t completely working with us and keeping us informed.
Delete all this, it's repetitive "Secondly, it became very time consuming because the insurance company didn’t keep us informed on what was going on and they didn’t really tell us much when I called to see if they found out more information."
no police report filed and "the person posing as myself"

 

[BooBoo*TheKiddo*]

Addicted, I did understand it. Thank you

Okay! I got them. Thank to both of you ladies. I greatly appreicate it.

Now I'm off to class. =]

 

[ChilliPepper]

Boo, I am so sorry.
I was without power due to a transformer blowing until about half an hour ago. I tried to get a chance while at work and heaven forbid, the boss kept making us work, lol.

 

[BooBoo*TheKiddo*]

That's all right Chilli. I figured you were busy. =]

Thanks anyways though

 

[BooBoo*TheKiddo*]

To those that helped with the paper on Identiy Theft, I got a B+ and the teacher found very few mistakes. She wants me to give it a better title. any ideas?

Also, I have a argumentive essay due this coming Thursday, its typred already. She took them up and passed them out to other people last Thursday and whomever was suppose to proofread mine and check for grammer errors, only found one on the whole paper. It's 2 pages long and they found one mistake, and I typed the paper and came up with it all at 5am the following morning so I think theres more mistakes then that. If you've time and wouldn't mind proofreading this paper for me, pm me or post here and I'll either send it to your email or in a pm on here.
If you want to proofread it, I've got until Thursday to get it done and ready to turn it in to her for a final grade.

Thanks again!

 

[addictedtochins]

Ok PM me

 

[Lmbswimmer]

Read it backwards. Seriously start in the lower right hand corner and skim the words backwards. You will catch areas where the words don't flow smoothly.

 

[ChilliPepper]

Go ahead and send it to me. I am home this weekend so I can log in and read tonight while hubby is golfing.

 

[BooBoo*TheKiddo*]

okay, I pmed it to you both. Thanks so much.

lmbswimmer, I'll give that a try

 

[3CsMommy]

You can send it to me too if you need to. I'd be happy to help again.

 

[BooBoo*TheKiddo*]

Thanks 3C'sMommy. I pmed it to you.

 

[VolunteerChin22]

If you need anymore eyes with this one or anything else you can email it to me [email protected]...I have a BA in English and a Masters in communication...

 

[BooBoo*TheKiddo*]

I'll take all the eyes I can get. the more the better.

I'll email it to you now

 

[VolunteerChin22]

I emailed you some ideas...